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| KelseyBell910 2008-02-27 ch 1,  | abusethis is really good. =] u should continue. |
| Katsiebee 2005-10-16 ch 1, | abuseMore, more! This is very interesting, keep going! |
| iluvsweep 2005-10-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseno no no no no! you HAVE to continue! you really do! i wanna know more about lane mcjames (hahaha! love the name btw!) and what happened to mallory and if she'll go to montana any time soon and about mike and stuff, pleeaassee continue!! you're on my author alert already so i'll know ;) hehe, update pweety plss! x x x |
| foreverlostnlonely 2005-10-02 ch 1, anon. | abusei like this story so far. im curious as too what you are planning, i think you should keep it up. oh and the title really makes you want to read |
| LuisaACS 2005-10-02 ch 1, | abuseyou need to write more |
| Sharbena 2005-09-30 ch 1, | abuseMust write more XD I love your stuff, and you can tell you're a horse lover cause you always have somthing about horses in it. ^.^ Please continue, I'd love to read more.--Shar |
| Jabber Jaws 2005-09-29 ch 1, | abuseTHIS STORY SOUNDS LIKE IT IS GOING TO BE GOOD. I HOPE THAT YOU CONTINUE IT. |
| Allison 2005-09-28 ch 1, anon. | abusePost more! I love it! I love all of your work, but Taryn seems really three demensional. And I can realate to a guy giving you the heebie jeebies before you even get to know him. My friend's stepbrother scares me really bad... Anyhoo, I love it. Please post more! |
| typicallyazngurl 2005-09-28 ch 1, | abuseThis DEFINITELY has to be longer. We need to find out Mallory's condition AND what about Lane And Taryn? They need their story too! Great job on this so far, but I think you left it entirely open ended on purpose. ^.~ |