I am so sorry for my lack of reviews. You're like, what, one of my biggest supporters. This was very intelligent. I got hold of part of theme- and the imagery of course really fit the idea well. I liked the part about Doris Day. It made me laugh. Good work.

i actually really like it. "Their glaucoma spreads."particularly that line, though i couldn't explain why in an entirely coherent way.

Hey first stnza is great but the rest of poem is almost like metaphor for itself becasue it pricks thru in quality, work harder(give it more time maybe) and it'l be fantastic!

Doris Day returns (hurrah!) "Whatever will be will be, the future's not ours to see." I liked this, keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.