Very creative!! I've never read anything like this. Wonderfully written. Absolutely beautiful.

The ellipes that are continually are both aggravating and intriging at the same time. It's an interesting approach at style that I haven't seen before. I LOVE the ending, though; I can't put my feelings on that into words.

kinda hazy... like it's going to fall off the page. I like the effect. Nice job.

I love the detail in this; it really comes alive like a painting across the page. I loved it, keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.