Very nice choice of words. And...nice thoughts! :D

Thought-provoking!

simple yet strong.i liked the town , where are you? it's been months.

Impressive. And true. After reading your essay, I remembered my experience which is kinda related to it... Ouch... Na-igo ko... :)

As usual, your work makes me think, and I'm sorry its taken me so long to review.

The comparison with the acacia and humans is painfully true, and heartbreakingly close to home. I love how it sounds like thoughts, as if they fell from your mind onto the paper and refined and polished themselves along the way. The water metaphor is perfect, and oh so true. Excellent.

Hello Mr. Sy. Sabi ko sayo I know nothing about lit. Pero to be extremely honest, I think it was written in a way that made the message seem preachier than necessary. Pero okay naman. :D