"frilly scarlet" = sexy.. underwear?

[Of sweetness without sugar/ Like a naked wedding cake.] Great comparison. Adds a nice tint to the poem, good word choice to accentuate the connotation and mood.

It's strange that "black hearts" wouldn't know of lies. But as gradients in comparison to the connotations of the color green, it's a good line to explain naivety.

[Kisses and caresses/ That she waited to reject/ Until green would turn red/ And love could accept.] Er.. Selectiveness and abstinence makes a heart pure? Is that what it means?

The nightmarish words are graphic and do really well-- it would have been pornographic if it extended past one stanza. You're a very tasteful author.

Great ending moral. A relief for all those knowing people. I have a friend who's like this. She's got a green mind, but she's white-hearted. Likes to wear short skirts and all that. Has a gutter mouth. But she can't even imagine what sex must really be like. It scares her to think about it. I know, I have to hear her blah-blah about it all the time. Rofl.

Well-done again, Worms.

i think i got a little confused a long the way changing my concept of the "green heart" but that doesn't seem to take away from your writing, it's still amazing. i really really like the second stanza...good job

You just have a penchant for losing me around the end.

But everything from structure, to timing, to diction is exceptional, as in most of your poems.

Please don't stop writing. Eventually I'll figure all this out.