   Osunale 2005-10-07 . chapter 1Those closing lines were quite stirring. A lovely, smooth, and absolutely wonderful poem. |
 classic violet 2005-10-03 . chapter 1This is ... Just... WOW.This poem is spectacular. It's so beatuiful. So amazing...Keep writing! I love it. |
 Ashes.to.Acid 2005-09-30 . chapter 1Creative! I like it.. now I wanna go color with chalk. >. |
 lackluster 2005-09-29 . chapter 1brilliant discription. i am so in love with it, it's amazing. |
 mizu no kokoro 2005-09-29 . chapter 1beautiful description~ i get the feeling that royalty in in the room O_o Good work^^
keep writing! |
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