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| Maranwe Telrunya 2006-01-25 ch 3, | My first thought? Weird. But I like it. I hope you write more. =^D |
| Maranwe Telrunya 2006-01-25 ch 2, | Mystery... I'm on to the next chapter, it's pretty interesting, makes me want to know what happens. |
| Maranwe Telrunya 2006-01-25 ch 1, | It sets a comfortable mood almost right away, I like it. |
| Kenny's Friend 2005-09-29 ch 3, | Very interesting. VERY interesting. I liked how you switched between the different perspectives of viewer, sniper, then president. This was a very creative, very interesting story. I liked it a lot. Keep writing. |
| AmbroseMaximilien 2005-09-29 ch 3, | Well, I just read the entire thing, and although I thought it was just a LITTLE dry, it was well written and very imaginative. Freezing the President?! WHOMG! O_O Anyway, good work! |