My first thought? Weird. But I like it. I hope you write more. =^D

Mystery... I'm on to the next chapter, it's pretty interesting, makes me want to know what happens.

It sets a comfortable mood almost right away, I like it.

Very interesting. VERY interesting. I liked how you switched between the different perspectives of viewer, sniper, then president. This was a very creative, very interesting story. I liked it a lot. Keep writing.

Well, I just read the entire thing, and although I thought it was just a LITTLE dry, it was well written and very imaginative. Freezing the President?! WHOMG! O_O

Anyway, good work!