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Lithium of Mercy 2008-06-19 ch 5,	abuseOoh, scary! His mental issues seem to be surfacing now. can't wait to see what happens next!
Lithium of Mercy 2008-06-11 ch 4,	abuseOh, lovely! I have to see what happens next. Please update soon!
Lithium of Mercy 2008-06-11 ch 3,	abuseHow shall I put this? Your story is one of the most compelling and gripping fictions (at least I hope so, for Alice's sake.) I have ever read. You have a real gift!
Maranwe Telrunya 2008-03-06 ch 1,	abuseHm... have I read this before? Probably. It's still good, even second time around. Oh... duh. I have. Ha. There now. You have your review. Even though it's not very long...
Slightly Obsessive 2008-02-10 ch 2,	abuseWow. I have to say this whole concept is really interesting. I have no idea where you are going with this, which is good. Mysterious. Intriguing. Is it just a psychological condition? And why? Very good use of suspense and writing technique. Just one thing, “Listen, Mr. Panner,” David I really have to go. If you really enjoy tormenting me, you know where to reach me.” Not sure, but i think you're missing a quotation mark and a word or two after "David".
lux in tenebris 2008-02-09 ch 2,	abuseHoly cow! That's some intense crap that you write! It had me riveted, really. I'm quite curious now to see what's wrong with him, and why he keeps having these nightmares - I mean, I've had nightmares before, but I've never heard of these kind. Anyway, I've spent enough time on the computer for today, and who knows when I'll have the time to come back and read more, but you can bet that your stories page will be my first priority. ;]
lux in tenebris 2008-02-09 ch 1,	abuseWow! All I can say is, I have really missed reading your stories! Plus, I'm really disappointed that I haven't kept up with them. ;] I'm going to have a ton of reading to do! But this chapter honestly has me caught, really. It was a fantastic cliff hanger, and I can't wait to click that ">>" button on the lower right hand of the screen. Applause! You have me hooked.
Wolf Ravensoul 2007-04-16 ch 5,	abuseReally good. Again you seem to have the contrast thing down. Great description and pace for the action scene. I got a real sense of urgency coming from it. All in all great chapter. Hope the rest of the story comes to you soon. TTFN. Cheers Wolf
Wolf Ravensoul 2007-04-13 ch 4,	abuseHi there I'm back for a wee bit so I thought I'd get back into this. Still very descriptive. I liked the little touches giving insight into their relationship. The little details make it all the more realistic. I like the way that David's real life is such a contrast to the nightmare he suffers. It just brings it home how precious his wife is to him and how traumatic these nightmares are becoming to him. Suspiciously happy ending to that chapter. Nice for a change. The stuff I usually read ends on a cliffhanger. Keep going with this. Its a really good read so far. TTFN. CHeers Wolf
Maranwe Telrunya 2006-07-17 ch 7,	abuseCreepy. I will be honest- I don't like the story at all. But, it is very well written, descriptive, and it made me shudder. Talk to ya later =D
Maranwe Telrunya 2006-07-17 ch 2,	abuseGaah! It's so frustrating! I want to read on, but if the... gr... it's well written, and would be less irritating to read if the swearing was omitted. I'll try reading the rest, but there's no promises that I'll finish reading.
Marionette Dancer 2006-07-10 ch 7,	abuseomg, that's so good! wow, i cant believe how good that is...but i need more! ah not fair! write more and post it soon! so totally awesome! marionette/lexa
Rebecca 2006-06-06 ch 6, anon.	abuseBabe.. I didn't know that you could write like this.. this is absolutly amazing.. I knew you were good at writing music, but I have never read any of this kind of stuff.. I can not begin to tell you how much I am at a loss of words right now.. you are truely amazing!! I love you
Wolf Ravensoul 2006-04-19 ch 3,	abuseOh my. I seem to be having a bit in common with the protagonist here. In both religion and a constant stream of nightmares or dreams of strange origins. This is moving at a good pace. Please keep it going. I will read through the rest when I can. TTFN.CheersWolf
Sub Form of Human 2006-03-29 ch 6,	abusePretty good story so far. I'm glad my dreams aren't like that most of the time. I can't wait to see how it ends. Your Worst Pal,Sub Form of Human

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