Ohh I like it! Just like ur stories on Fanfiction, good job! BTW On fanfiction I'm Emerald-Mistress but I like this good job!

Nice poem. Must've somehow slipped through my author's alert...Prolly forgot to switch it to my "new" e-mail address...^^; I took care of that, though. I like the free-verse thing, it really worked for the poem. ^^

hey i loved the poem

I like the truthfulness of this, and they style really brings your mind and feelings to light. Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.