ok, so this story is SUPER good so far! I think you should conitinue it. I noticed that you havent for about a year and a half, but if you do, I think it'd be interesting...

Who does Shannon go with in the story? Who are the couples of this story?
Are the couples Maureen and Brian? Maureen and Casey? Shannon and Casey? Shannon and Drew?
It's very unclear to me. Shannon expresses no "fuzzy" feelings towards any of the characters. And yes, I just used the word fuzzy feelings:]
Since you haven't updated in about two years, is this story on Hiatus?

I Like, I Lust, I Love!!Please Update Soon!!

Please update soon! I really would like to know how this story ends :)

Just one little nitpick, you slipped into third person when Shannon was describing how Drew was starting to grow on her. Other than that, I'm enjoying this story very much so far. Haha, I'm rather anxious to see what happens when people realize Brian's her stepbrother. And to see what the party's going to be like.

I have to admit, I burst into laughter at the thought of Union Station being a super-shopping center (It used to be really awesome, but has kind of crapped out since I was a kid), and then I read the next sentence and laughed even harder.

Just had to put that there. Off to read the rest of the story.

I really hope you will continue, cause that's one awesome story. The characters are very realistic and well fleshed-out, there isn't a two-dimensional character to be found. Your grammar is also good, but you miss a comma here and there (that isn't that much of a problem, so never mind really :]). Keep writing!

luv the story so far update soon!

I have to say, I like how it's going so far.
And, although I don't know how she feels, it seems pretty pitiful.
You're great author and I hope you won't be spoiling a perfetly good opening like some others I've read.
So, just so I can see how it'll turn out, I'll put it on my Alerts...
Keep going though, you have my full support.

MR

A great story!
Hope that you update soon.

This story is getting really interesting! I can't wait for the next one!

update please!

I am left intrigued.

UPDATE PLS

Hey there, I love the series you write. Right now I'm reading '102 Miles to Hell'. It's awesome! Are you going to update anytime soon? I'd love to read more. Keep up the great work girlie!