it's just gorgeous! i love it! it's like u'r speaking from the heart, but in a poem! it's awsm! keep it up!

This is a great poem. The couplets at the end of the first and second stanzas didn't seem to flow very well but that may have been intentional. The words, however, are simply beautiful.

This is lovely. I really like how it rhymes and flows so smoothly. =)

mushy sappy love poem are sweet and tasty and is sugary delightful^^ awesome job, makes me yearn for someone to hold^^

keep writing!