I’m sick of misbelieve and dejection... misbelief

Its never as good as the cover...it's

Its the metaphor of our race...it's

::Sigh:: so true

I definetly prefer the end to the start, all the lines beginning with 'somewhere' are beautiful. Great piece! I promise to read your new story later! QueenVixta

Heck what a graeat poem...u start off by attacking ur stae (which is so correct from where i aam...) artificial food, TV dinners, i t all makes sense..but then you go into your feelings and realitism of how somewhere somehting is happeneing to someone...very good_ Luved it once again...GO YOU!

interesting concept repetition added strength to your emotions good work

keep writing!