Such desolation and inner turmoil that yearns for peace and finds none.

wow, that was like a hectic ride, detatched but so intense.

This is amazing. The raw emotion, flow, and even shape of this really helped to make me feel the emotions you were displaying. Keep it up!

So much emotion. So much pain. Really great poem.

Holy sh1t. That was so amazing. Wow. It was long, but I read every word. I really like how you write, it's inspiring. I'm adding you to my faves, I hope to see more in the future!

-Ethereal Heart Break

my gosh that is brilliant. you've been writing even more and more wonderful poetry lately. the word choice here is perfect. you picked a great rhythm for this poem.-kwazykandypie AKA Kelly Ann-

very emotional and all over the place, i fucking love it, twisted and strange and full of interesting imagery, bitter, beautifully done

wow, really powerful. good work, and for the record i think rape is wrong whether the victim is a virgin or not. i like the line 'of well matured immaturity' what happened sounds awful, but u sound like a real strong person and i feel so lame for complaining about what i complain about in my poems. wow, i am pathetic. but the point is, that this is a really powerful, intense poem and its great that u keep on writing. :) so keep it up. :)

Power.

wow this is amazing i am definately putting it as one of my favs the structure and emtion is really powerful its just a wow factor all around :)

Heart-wrenchingly beautiful and desparingly blunt. Love it.

this ran like a volcano, it seemed to get faster and faster before finally erupting. burns like lava (if that made sense) very honest and baring. - the Lady Elaine

You just a bloody poetry machine lol! I like.

Beautiful, really gritty. I like your technique in this piece Juliet, it's very polished yet still remains spontaneous and inspiring. Nicely balanced.

Beautiful...