 Panchromatic 2006-06-19 . chapter 1hAHAHA."you prowl amongst the rest of us/jelly bellied"funny. |
 Snow Illusion 2005-10-24 . chapter 1Very powerful ending. I loved how there was a story to this. Great job. |
 Darius de Markl 2005-09-30 . chapter 1I love the reality of it all! Nice work. Way to capture the whole emotion. Keep it going!!
P.S. The reason Ethena is posted twice is because the second is a continuation of the first. |
 Serendipity Pierce-Clarke 2005-09-30 . chapter 1Ouch. Your coach is like,a perv who only puts the skimpy chicks on the team?What an **. I am with you in your rightful resentment |
 BlackBile 2005-09-30 . chapter 1 Too lazy to log in...but yeah, really like this. Some gym teachers and coaches can be real perverts. Good job. |