Now, it pisses me off when brilliant, inventive, thought provoing stories such as this one are forgotten and unloved simply because they don't suit the needs of the majority (ex: Written porn) I think this is GENUIS. The idea you had was mind blowing. It's not to late for you to continues updating this, if you wish- you would have one happy reader. I'm tired of all the same kinds of stories in the Romance section.
And you wowed me. I hope to possibly see you update again...

This seems really original and interesting. I adore your descriptions. The prolouge captured my attention and pulled you threw at a great pace. Update soon!