So this was your firts poem? It's really good... I think you should consider writing about happier topics though, hehe.

Weird, your old stuff is still really good. I want to burn all my old poems. Great job.

wow.. i love all ur work.. ur still a really good writter!

I adore this, in truth it nearly made me cry..perhaps I am just pathetic...nah your writing really is that good, I like the repitition in this, and some of the lines in this are stunning, too many to mention in fact. This is definately going on my favourites. Loz x

Aw, so sad and very well written. I'm putting this on my favorite poems list!!

thats beatiful. love the repeatition.keep writting.

lost angel bleeding in the rain. erAced