wow, powerful ending! i am so excited to read more of your work. you are talented and thank you for sharing your gifts because you are in inspiration. (and thank you for your constructive criticism on my own pieces...you were right on!)

Beautiful. Amazing. This is an amazing peice of poetry.

wow, brilliant ending. it just makes you stop. rare, very rare.

ps: happy (late) birthday.:) i was away. sososorry.

wow, i can't seem to imagine the colour golden red O_o must be, unique... well, that part really stood out to me^^ the ending line, was, whew... mixed emotions~ good work!

keep writing!

Love is the word preached, but love is the word most often breached. Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.