FictionPress
|
let the words flow
Mobile
Browse
Fiction
Poetry
Just In
All
New Stories
Updated Stories
Communities
General
Fiction
Poetry
Forums
General
Fiction
Poetry
Betas
Story
Story
Writer
Forum
Community
Reviews for
candlefight
no.peace.los.angeles
2/17/06 . chapter 1
Wow, beautiful metaphor. You made it work really well, and it is just a wonderful poem. Gorgeous words. Keep writing! :)
crackpot
10/1/05 . chapter 1
really beautiful words.