I actaully like it.. its relaly simple, but the repition forms a cool beat and it has a great lesson

lol hehehehe it makes me hyper. I liked "scared"

This has a specific flow to it. Rather rapid. Strange how one can write things very well when hyper. My friend wrote "Lord of the Slimfast" while drunk on sparkling cider, but that's a different story I do not wish to explain. Great job!