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| Kotaku-The-Legends 2008-07-25 ch 14,  | abuseSuch a good story. I've been meaning to leave a review for SO long but never remembered. Please keep writing. This is VERY good. |
| Always Pencil 2008-07-04 ch 14, | abuseWow. I haven't read this story in a while. I like it. More please! |
| MiddiVampira 2008-02-10 ch 13, | abuseOHMAHGAH you MUST update soon i LOVE this story and if you need a beta ill do it anyways update when you can please until then ima read the rest of your wonderful stuff luv Middi |
| Always Pencil 2008-01-24 ch 13, | abuseWhat the hell...? |
| lizbre 2007-09-22 ch 13, | abuseI just wanted to let you know I thought this was one of the sweetest most romantic stories. I cannot wait for another chapter. I read the whole thing yesterday and it was so late when I finshed and I had to get up at 4 am so I came back in to let you know I liked it. |
| Addicted2music 2007-09-20 ch 13, | abusehaha aww they're so adorable! Great chap! =] but -scolds- "Took you long enough!" but then again... my updates are pretty slow too. Haha hopefully the next update will be faster! |
| E.M. Silver 2007-06-13 ch 12, | abuseDamn I haven't read this in a while!! I totally forgot how cute it was!! What a cute couple lolz Wii challenge!! Can't wait to see who wins that. Well, awesome story as always. I hope you update again soon!! E.M. Silver |
| Whispery 2007-04-26 ch 12, | abuseAww havent reviewd in a while...I think this story is increadably cute^_^ Heh, update soon so I can see who wins the game :-) Whisp |
| SayurixMion 2007-04-15 ch 12, | abuseI can't help but laugh when I see how much they both want to.. become intimate (lol) and that they changed roles too :) I love this fic, it's frigging awesome, and hilarious-in a good way. The wii challenge at the end made me wanna fall out my chair XD |
| SayurixMion 2007-04-15 ch 4, | abuseI have to say, your last comment really made me laugh. And because you made such a wonderful fic and have done such a great job as well as saying 'have a wonderful day', I wanted to say I enjoyed this story so far incredibly. I think you've done such an awesome job on potraying emotions and it makes my heart melt to see the two characters with each other and how they interact. I really loved it. Keep up the great work, it makes me smile to see that some people are still writing such sentimental fics. |
| long story 2007-04-13 ch 12, anon. | abuseHey! I've been keeping up with this since chapter three, and I have to say it's my favorite story on Fictionpress at the moment. It's the first thing I check when I get on. Woo, update. Sumi is so devilishly innocent. I'll be watching out for updates. |
| Addicted2music 2007-04-11 ch 12, | abuseAww that was cute! =D Update! |
| Krimzonrayne 2007-04-10 ch 12, | abuseAnother beautifully sweet chapter... I love how you keep reminding us how innocent and unassuming Sumi can be... Also, like how well you portrayed Marissa's love and near obession with Sumi... it's really cute and it makes me jealous I have never fallen head over heel in love with someone before. |
| Krimzonrayne 2007-04-01 ch 11, | abuseAH I need more, that was so sweet. I think I became addicted to this fic now.. |
| Krimzonrayne 2007-04-01 ch 8, | abuseThat chapter was so cute. I'm totally in love with Sumi right now it's not funny. |