 Theory Of The 4th Dimension 2005-11-17 . chapter 1This poem is so cool! The wordings and flow is just adorable and very creative.Good job with the personification, I haven't really been familiar with using that in a poem. |
 simpleplan13 2005-10-05 . chapter 1nice personification.. cute story |
 Nobody-n-Particular 2005-10-04 . chapter 1I love the personification. |
 the-bird-flies 2005-10-03 . chapter 1I love this. The way that you incorporated family, the planets, and the legend of Sedna is very cleverly done. I love it.
TBF |
 poetic abortion 2005-10-02 . chapter 1this is amazing. and to be blunt, I love the everything about it. gorgeous poem. I lovelove it so much.
~* noelle |
 lackluster 2005-10-02 . chapter 1that's really something. very injteresting, and clever. |
 Muggins 2005-10-01 . chapter 1 This is quite clever, with a "tolerable" level of angst ;) (j/k). |
 Ashes.to.Acid 2005-10-01 . chapter 1I thought this piece was clever. Family issues expressed through the planets, I adore it! Great job! |
 Kat 2005-09-30 . chapter 1 Amazing! |