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| Theory Of The 4th Dimension 2005-11-17 ch 1, | abuseThis poem is so cool! The wordings and flow is just adorable and very creative.Good job with the personification, I haven't really been familiar with using that in a poem. |
| simpleplan13 2005-10-05 ch 1, | abusenice personification.. cute story |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-10-04 ch 1, | abuseI love the personification. |
| the-bird-flies 2005-10-03 ch 1, | abuseI love this. The way that you incorporated family, the planets, and the legend of Sedna is very cleverly done. I love it. TBF |
| poetic abortion 2005-10-02 ch 1, | abusethis is amazing. and to be blunt, I love the everything about it. gorgeous poem. I lovelove it so much. ~* noelle |
| lackluster 2005-10-02 ch 1, | abusethat's really something. very injteresting, and clever. |
| Muggins 2005-10-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is quite clever, with a "tolerable" level of angst ;) (j/k). |
| Ashes.to.Acid 2005-10-01 ch 1, | abuseI thought this piece was clever. Family issues expressed through the planets, I adore it! Great job! |
| Kat 2005-09-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseAmazing! |