There's something about the rhyme scheme and the general layout of this poem that I really like. I think that you really manage to put your thoughts and emotions into this poem really well.

Job well done.

Beautiful, tender, and touching. I hope that you find a way of communicating your feelings to this girl, because any girl would be touched to hear such devoted and tender words.

It's sweet, just made a smile light up on my face.I really like the last stanza. I'd be flattered if someone felt this way about me. I think I'll save this onto my favourites, there's something about it I like.

EB