Good story. This chapter was... well... confusing, and really sad, but i still liked it. :)

oh man oh man oh man this is getting good :D

whay did you do? omg! i was shocked at first and then i was like 'm ok, this is kinda cool. oh ouch, she got dumped but it could be ok. hopefully they she wont get with will tho.' the BLAM! she was dreaming! of course she was dreaming! ug!

but update soon cause the supence is killing me!

i have to say that when i read the end of this chapter i let out a sigh of relief. it would have been horrible for them to have broken up.

I hate you. Not really but what on earth posessed you to end it like that! I have spent the last 3 hours reading this story to find out in the end she ends up without Jess because of the jerk. Sorry I did enjoy the story only I really really dislike how you ended it.

It was a story that I couldn't stop once I had started - very well written :)

Oh, my goodness. I love it. I didn't think she had been raped. I just thought she might have gotten drunk at the party or something. This is going to be great. :)

okay, so I just got caught back up with this story and I must say, it's taking some interesting turns. I would like to see how Jess handles the...I dunno what to call it...I hope there's a way that Janie can keep her son and keep Will out of her life.

Whew! Trickery, Trickery. Finally she came to her senses.

So I just read all of this over the last three days or so.

I have to say that at first, I thought it was a little strange/unrealistic for Jess to become so attached to Janine after all the time away. I mean, it's not like Jess was really her friend--he was John's. And then for him to just so quickly want to claim the baby as his own was kind of weird.

But once I got over my cynicism of the quickness of relationship, I've come to find their relationship kind of adorable. Jess is incredibly sweet and it's no wonder why Janine would have been so hung up on him. He's completely loveable.

And I think you're handling Will quite admirably. He's a creeper, that can't be denied. He gave me the creeps from the getgo. But everything you had play out between him and Janine and his mother was pretty realistic--especially when you have someone as young and impressionable as Janine. She's not been around quite long enough to be able to fight a battle as big as that on her own and Will knew it. So it was, unfortunately, very easy for him to bully her. Plus, add up all that power and influence that his family has and it would be enough to scare any pregnant seventeen year-old. Poor girl.

Also, this last chapter had me going "What the hell? Gtfo!" I was not very happy. But then when I read the last passage of it, I kind of released a breath of relief. Thank goodness that was just a nightmare that she had. Thank you for not actually doing that. Ew. Will needs to have a comupance. Like majorly. He's so damn cocky and the brilliant thing is that even though he would undoubtedly get away with it in real life is that this is fiction. Anything can happen in fiction. So please, let Will have his testicles ripped off somehow or something. That would be brilliant!

Good job on your story! Very enjoyable. :)

i'm glad she's telling jess what happened now. i was so freaked out when i thought you'd jumped ahead a few years! ~ Alenor

OMFG! i hate you! i nearly frikin cried in that chapter! i really really really hope that will goes and dies in a hole with his mother. seriously. this story is totally not going on my favourites list if will gets a part in jess and janie's lives. yeah its blackmail. another reason why will is such a bad influence. :P anyways, on to happier things. is jess' name short for jesse? or is it just jess? i didnt know jess was a guys name too... update soon!

kinda feel sad for janie n jess. i thought they will be a good couple. i m kinda at a loss. wat happen now?

ohh my gosh. i started reading the first few sentences.. and it was like.. in the future. so i went back a chapter cuz i thought i missed something.. and then i got neat the end when the.. dream? ends. lol
thanks for the chapter!! chan't wait for more!! :D :D :D

NYAH!

That was so terrible for Jess (in the nightmare thing)! I hope they find some way out of this

WOW. That was intense. I hope Janie and Jess are on the next flight to abu dabi! I'm glad for the disclaimer at the top of the chapter though. the whole time I'm reading, I'm going I can't believe this. I can't believe this. I'm thoroughly excited for the next chapter.