Wow, I really really like this. You're a wonderful writer.

Awesome imagery. I love that line "Because the dead don't cry." It's just dead on! Jealousy!

Wow, I really like this poem. I've got one coming up. I kinda like it.

There was a time when I felt like this. Still somewhat do. But one must remain strong no matter what. I loved the chorus the most. It just seem to connect the whole song in my opinion. A excellent job.

another heartbreaking peice... i wish the world was not filled with such sadness...

This rocks! Great job!

If you kill yourself, there would be one less really awesome poet with REAL talent on fictionpress..and then that would really suck.. :( But anyway - I love how you can actually imagine a person outside, looking at reality, knowing exactly how that person is feeling..

-freak from the corner

You know my opinion...i'm pratcially in the same boat...good one..