I'm kinda sorry. I can't type in Chinese xDD -pinyin kills me-

Anyways. Love the whole simile thing and I'm just thinking. What a girl? How would you /ever/ find something to give her? xDD She totally over thinks the whole thing. But I enjoyed it and it was really pretty in a fluffy way.

Good job, Add Oil

I like your writing a lot!
And flowers too... =)

Flowers... ^_^

5, 她真痛苦啊。

我读的要哭了。

哈哈，你写得好好啊。应该多写一些这种故事。

继续努力吧！=）

Lol, sorry, pointless I know but I don't have Chinese software, making this infinitely harder to resist. Those squares look a bit like windows of a ship... or maybe even of a plane...

Thanks very much for your review! (I'll read and review one of your English works now.) :D

This is really nice! I wouldn't be able to write as well as this. Like BlueJayWalking, I like your second last paragraph "在花花兊子的王国里，到底是哪个花朵坐上皇后的宝座?" It's simply 画龙点睛! Keep writing.

...i cant read japanese

or this chinese

i cant read either

I really liked the ideas in the story. When she was thinking about the flowers and mostly the stuff in the sixth pp, though, I thought it was a bit wordy and could be more concise. The idea was nice, and if you gave the characters more background, it'd be more understandable why she's being so analytical.

I don't have chinese software so i thought i'd just comment on your nice squares, lol.

我无法真正地读这。

^_^;

Hi. Hmm, I thought this story was kind of sad..and a little unimaginable. Wouldn't a girl who would come up with all that from her dearest [xD] giving her a simple lily be.. I mean, she kind of thinks too much!^^ But I think she's really sweet, in that way. She cares enough for him to find his 玫瑰花. That was touching.^^

Oh. To me, "这里，你就错了。是，玫瑰花和百合花都是花，但是你不能凭这点而认定她們两种花是同等的。这是行不通的想法。最终，你还是会因为百合花达不上玫瑰花的水准而感到失望的," was a little too expo-ish.=P you know, "这里", "行不通的想法" and "最终". Oh well. Blame it on school influence. But it works okay enough here.

I thought the comparison between the flowers was really good. It acted as a wonderful metaphor for true love...[collective aws...] And of course I loved the line "在花花兊子的王国里，到底是哪个花朵坐上皇后的宝座？" This is a very nice, clever piece. Haha write more like this!^^

-PX [aren't I nice to give such a long review?^^]