Interesting. A bit over-the-top at times, and yet, pretty good. Maybe it's best she could not remorse; with such a tragic life, I would hate to see how she would have turned out.

Well done, keep it up.

Wow. That was really good... Write more and don't let your talent go to waste.

thats good, i like it. ^_^

Wow...at some points seemed a bit drastic, but overall this is a very stirring piece...Its amazing how we do indeed need sadness as part of our life...it helps us grow, and its needed just as much as feeling happy. Nice work!

Mike