 Astarayl 2005-10-01 . chapter 1The flow you managed in this piece was unimaginable.
"socialskill.exe
Won't run on my operating system
So I install an alternative
Self-Loathing, Lifelong Edition"
-I really liked those lines.. it was really interesting how you could insert more 'technical' lines as well as emotional ones.. and still manage to keep this work feel like one piece. I could feel the hopelessness in this.. it was somewhat pessimistic- but it was excellent and I really liked this piece. |