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Reviews of all chapters
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Reviews For:
Fire, Light, Darkness, Stone, Water, Air
Bloodfeeder
2008-11-20 . chapter 2
Pretty! I like Lexi and I like Deche!! Esp. Deche, and of course the main character!
Can't wait for more!
Lee
Celyn
2005-10-19 . chapter 2
Nice continuation, didn't spot any spelling or grammar errors. Perhaps a little dull... not much happening... maybe you could work in a little more character background? Still, I like. Caught kissing in the woods... hehehe.
Celyn
2005-10-10 . chapter 1
:D Nice start. Some grammatical errors, though (to instead of too, there instead of their, that kind of stuff).
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