'over shadow' was a great useage of words at the end, which was brilliant on its own by the way. A little long, possibly a little too repetitive, but not to a point of taking away from the emotion and meaning of the poem. I really love the sort of symbolism the poem has to me.

ANNA

holly hell

this is the most wicked thing ive ever read

it reminds me of harry and dumbledore - lol

keep up the awesomeness