|Reviews for Misshapen scrawls with curly tails|
| Plinky 1/11/06 . chapter 1
Interesting piece - made me think. Nice imagery. Keep writing!
| diesoz 1/6/06 . chapter 1
very metaphorical, very...very...something, something good, but I don't know the word for it.
| La Gitane 12/28/05 . chapter 1
Very nicely done... I love the loose freedom in this - as if there are random letters and punctuation marks flying around in a moment. Actually 'punctuation shrugged off' is a lovely line.
You seemed to abandon the writing theme half way through the poem, however, which gave it a slightly disjoined feel.
But still, a great poem with good imagery.
| renru-no-ren 11/28/05 . chapter 1
0.0 okay then.
| Roman Emperor 11/18/05 . chapter 1
maybe its becuase im a guy and have a tendency to think of the perverse, but this i see is a very sensual and becomes a very sexual poem. THis is really awesome. Kudos.
| deletemyaccount2012 11/9/05 . chapter 1
Beautifully written. I especially enjoyed the opening lines.
| simpleplan13 10/7/05 . chapter 1
awesome.. very powerful.. I love that last line
| rira-chan 10/3/05 . chapter 1
great poem! loved it! thanks for your reveiw btw and yes i did mean worthless in my poem...i can't spell so...that's my excuse...keep up the great work kay! -
| White Tea and Ginger 10/1/05 . chapter 1
I love this. Beautifully written. Amazing imagery and passion. Great peice, keep up the great work!
| Fleabitten McNasty 10/1/05 . chapter 1
I don't really get it but I like the part about peeling off his skin. Probably just too deep for my shallow mind. ;)