Interesting piece - made me think. Nice imagery. Keep writing!

very metaphorical, very...very...something, something good, but I don't know the word for it.

Very nicely done... I love the loose freedom in this - as if there are random letters and punctuation marks flying around in a moment. Actually 'punctuation shrugged off' is a lovely line.

You seemed to abandon the writing theme half way through the poem, however, which gave it a slightly disjoined feel.

But still, a great poem with good imagery.

0.0 okay then.

maybe its becuase im a guy and have a tendency to think of the perverse, but this i see is a very sensual and becomes a very sexual poem. THis is really awesome. Kudos.

Beautifully written. I especially enjoyed the opening lines.

awesome.. very powerful.. I love that last line

great poem! loved it! thanks for your reveiw btw and yes i did mean worthless in my poem...i can't spell so...that's my excuse...^^...keep up the great work kay!! ^-^

~rira-chan~

I love this. Beautifully written. Amazing imagery and passion. Great peice, keep up the great work!

I don't really get it but I like the part about peeling off his skin. Probably just too deep for my shallow mind. ;)