intersesting poem - honest - i love the first 4 lines especialy - really makes the point

ya good but i realy need to get this out of my system

Sit around and watch the tube but, nothing's onChange the channels for an hour or twoWiddle my thumbs just for a bitI'm sick of all the same old shitIn a house with unlocked doorsAnd I'm ** lazy

Bite my lip and close my eyesTake me away to paradiseI'm so damn bored I'm going BLIND!And I smell like **

Peel me off this velcro seat and get me movingI sure as hell can't do it by myselfI'm feeling like a DOG IN HEATBarred indoors from the summer streetI locked the door to MY OWN CELLAnd I lost the key

Bite my lip and close my eyesTake me away to paradiseI'm so damn bored I'm going blind!And I smell like **

I GOT NO MOTIVATIONWHERE IS MY MOTIVATIONNO TIME FOR MOTIVATIONSMOKING MY INSPIRATION

Sit around and watch the phone but no one's callingCall me pathetic call me WHAT YOU WILLMy mother says to get a jobBut she don't like the one SHE's gotWhen masturbation's lost its funYou're ** breaking

Bite my lip and close my eyesTake me away to paradiseI'm so damn BORED I'm going blindAnd loneliness has to sufficeBit my lip and close my eyesSlipping away to paradiseSome say, "Quit or I'll go BLIND"But it's just a myth

Beautiful! I like the mention of screaming.

i really liked it. great job!

SP

very pretty, yet oh so sad. i can identify with the feelings in this. good job hun.

xo

This is sad. I hope you're doing alright. I don't know you, but if you ever need someone to talk to, I'm here.This is a good poem. Keep up the great work.