Awesome. I like the idea, the plot of the poem. You have a real finess of use of words.

It's wonderful! I love it!:>

I liked this poem a lot, though the stuff inbetween the stanzas is a bit distracting. Nonetheless! it's good! i liked it!

wow... That's sorta how I feel when I just recently broke off with my bf... x.x It's like, the much darker and painful version... 'When I cast you aside, and leave you alone and crying. Will you still love me?' Really got to me. x.x I even wrote a short drabble about my feelings on this but THIS poem... This poem really got to me. I love it.