Huh? Wow... that literally knocked me out. Col...

I had to re-read the Patrick part though.

Confusing, but terrible addictive and cute. Why do I love your one-shots so?

Sorry this is a bit short. I'm just stressed, I guess.

Ooh. That rhymed.

-Sugar

oh! I love it! great one shot...but i want more! seqeuls , prequels , anything! more on ivan and patrick , more on greg , more more more! did i mentin that this was good?

Heh, well I liked it..but I couldn't say I don't like any of your stories..ah well! (don't think she made any sense)

Lol. If only MY parents had taken me being gay so well...amazing story you have here. And not just because im gay lol ;). You have ab impeccable style, and I'm already anzious to read mroe of your work. Anyways, awesome character development and tension. It was great.

Mike