I like this. It has a definate pop feeling to it that judging by your list of fav bands in your profile I guess you were going for? I can see your writing being used for established acts as it seems to be of that standard (well this is the 1st one I've read but if the rest are as good then I stand by that statement). Keep writing and keep up the good work :)

I LOVED THIS! You are an amazing writer! This whole song is just wonderful. The lyrics just make me so happy and it makes me hopeful of what I may someday find. Great job with this.

Aww this is so beautiful. Well written. I like this. QueenVixta

Aw, how sweet! ^_^ That's so gorgeous! Very well written. Keep writing!

~Anna~