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nichloe 2009-11-16 . chapter 14
This story was short, but it's cute and sweet.

nichloe
Ponder000 2009-06-05 . chapter 14
Neat ending! Serves the story well and he so subtly became Fay again =)
Ponder000 2009-06-05 . chapter 11
Oh scary, i am a twin, my twin has thought of killing herself a few times and was even close to it before she chickened out. No wonder why his brother's loss is still affecting him so intensely, i cannot imagine losing my twin, well of course i can but it isnt pretty and probably will be much much worse in real life time than what i see in my mind!
Ponder000 2009-06-05 . chapter 6
He sighed. “You do know this is going to change everything?”

Abit strange, like he's out of character or sthing...
Ponder000 2009-06-05 . chapter 5
Abit too poetic to be realistic at times. Like what they say.
I thought shooting stars werent stars at all, they're actually just meteors.
Ponder000 2009-06-05 . chapter 4
Fear is a bit wierd, it dint give that impression in the first chap. Painting his lashes darker? Hms...

you were the most frustrating human being on the planet.”
is this a typo?

Chaps should be abit more meaningful i think
Ponder000 2009-06-05 . chapter 3
Hhaha, some of the things they say in here is very corny but its quite funny to read
Ponder000 2009-06-05 . chapter 2
'Fear stiffen.' Think its meant to be Fear stiffened. Anywho, another simple one. I liked the first chapter better but this one also has its highlights like, its quite calm and easy to read
Ponder000 2009-06-05 . chapter 1
Cool start, not quite quirky, abit different i guess. Its cool i like it. Simple but not stupid if u know what i mean, not really good at reviewing,..
Gentle. Edge. 2009-04-23 . chapter 14
I think your writing style is really unique. It's so poetic and it makes everything seem so much more significant. Amazing job :)
Gentle. Edge. 2009-04-23 . chapter 1
This was an interesting chapter... Lily seems like an interesting character.
MissMei92 2009-03-16 . chapter 14
I played Kelly Clarkson's song Cry while reading this and I wound up crying (like I always do when I listen to it), but gosh. Fear/Fay is the cutest character I've ever read.

Your story was so simple, but it had SO MUCH meaning. It's amazing. Period.
akaCHEEKS 2009-03-06 . chapter 1
wow. talk about pyscho. she's actually very hilarious. i fell in love with her when i first started reading already!
Imagined Insanity 2008-10-21 . chapter 14
THIS WAS SO GOOD.
I should probably stop shouting.
When I was reading it, I felt like I could be Lily. Or that she was me. And it's so rare for a character to do that.
Imagined Insanity 2008-10-21 . chapter 7
THIS IS SO AMAZING.
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