I can really relate to this poem, it is very poetic. I like it. Just keep up the good work, you've got potential.

For a "friend", eh? Haha... Nicely done... no mistakes I could find... keep it up!

such a powerful and emotional piece that gets straight to the point, awesome job!-anime freakizoid X^_^X

sweet, very sweet.

the eyes, description of eyes.and blue skies, just so simple.

banners of the tired, mark heavy lines beneath our eyes.

so sorry, i need sleep.

woah..I love this poem

Wow...this poem said a whole lot without using too many words. you're lucky to have a friend like that, too. Great job!