|Reviews for The Last Time|
| Jessica 10/4/05 . chapter 1
Very touching and nicely written.
| Getuie 10/3/05 . chapter 1
There's an innocence to this as you focus on the perspective of the child... it dampens the emotions that could've raged from this piece... which is most likely a good thing since it's quite heartwrenching already.
Well written... The picture is clear and easy to be caught up in.
| Jitterrue 10/2/05 . chapter 1
wow, this so sad. Very good description. only a few grammatical errors