I LOVE IT!! very well done! i like how you said you won't shed a tear it reminds me so much of a resent event in my life...excelent. your right its not for kids.

Eeh. *shudders* I can just see a demented clown sitting by my bed and singing this to me! Where's my teddy bear?...

Creepy! I like the lines "When the bow breaks,/You'll crumble and die." THe imagery in this is very pretty, even though it's meant to be creepy. Your rhythm in the poem wasn't quite consistent- the lines kind of threw me. But the poem itself is really good. I like the concept and the final good night is great.

Ooh, I love this. I love new takes on nursery rhymes.

wow! this is awsome. i love it. :)

wow, this is so... twisted, I guess u could say. Anyway, if you notice, all those songs and fairy tales r so sad. The baby falls and dies, the three blind mice get their tales lopped off, humpty breaks and no one can help him, Peter's wife has to live in a pumpkin... the r all so sad.