Tight story...very well written...I've written a story too but i doubt you'd be interested with yours being so good and all. Well rock on and keep writng cause i'll keep reading!...by the way i heard about you from Adam if ya know who i'm talkin about

What an...interesting story my friend. I am a little confused but at the same time I am intrigued.One questoin, if the kind did not know what the...thingy she stole did then why was it so valuable to him?I'm I just missing something here? Oh well. Nice!

Love this story. I take all the names are Latin? I'd love to see what happens next to Amabella.