Wow. I love this one. Despite the fact that you sounded like a borg when you said, "resistance is futile." :-P But, I love this poem. I love the message, the way it's put into words, and I especially love the last stanza. :-)

I think the last stanza was the best. It's a whole poem in itself. You should make this into two poems; keep the first three stanzas as one poem, and expand on the last paragraph into another poem. I especially liked the last two lines " You laugh, but it doesn't matter;/I am a loser- and there's nothing better."Lovely. I like this.

Brilliant! This is a ... I don't know what it is ... something good. Like a Reeses cup, only not. I like Reeses cups. Because they're good. (Who needs a nap? ME!!) Anyway ... really good. Keep it up!

~Angel's Broken Heart

I don't know if I liked the last line of this. Maybe it's the word "loser" I don't like - I know it's what you meant to expres and I respect that but I thought a word more expressive of the speaker's vulnerability might be better. But I like this still...a very interesting expression of an old theme.

I liked this, but there's a sense of rambling about it. Really, I'm not sure that the last stanza fits. Just my opinion, of course.

awesome, when read in its proper context. rofl.

Original,and you get your point across ^_^ I like it, keep it up.--pammy-