Don't know if thats intentional, but this has some brutally well crafted eating disorder tones.

Either way, its really good.

This is heartbreaking (and perfect). I love "little miss queenofhearts" and "she'll start over (be smaller)".

Usually I give a super detailed review... But I don't know what to say here - everything fit beautifully and came together just so that you feel all the emotion and ache for this girl, course at the same time you can put yourself in her mind and remember when you yourself felt a similar way.

HOLY SHIT! no! I love this one! I love it!

It kind of reminds me of my own poem, "Oh Ana"

God shit, love. Good shit indeed.

...wow.

i love you.

"(hallowed) dresden bones"/ "bleed out he through her lips"

beautifully done . i coudln't critize if i tried.

i love how u expressed everything, i really liked the last line "she wants to dance on water", great job!

It's a bad thing some people go through, but I like how you expressed the whole thing, the format is awsome. I liked the last line, especially. Keep it up _-pammy-

gorgeous. really, I can barely think of anything else to say. "around her (hallowed) dresden bones" oddly, I like that line. the whole thing is just so gorgeous. can I say, beautiful?

* noelle