It is nice, but may I ask why it rated T?

*confuzzled*

aww! *cheers* this is so cute...and its awsome at the same time...keep it up.-pammy-

Very nicely expressed. You definitely put the feeling of love into words very smoothly. Keep up the good work!

this was a really sweet poem, and i really liked it.

bravo, keep up the great work...

yay! I love this poem! The last five lines are genious.