|Reviews for Sweet Rising Dawn|
| sarah1491 1/30/06 . chapter 1
I love it! Such simplicity, serenity. Wow. Amazing. Just amazing. :D
| Adonia Chesser 12/20/05 . chapter 1
Now this was quiet the poem, I loved it.
| Master Bates 12/15/05 . chapter 1
| Jennifer H. Westall 10/17/05 . chapter 1
Hmm, I love it when I follwo a bunch of links in other people's reviews and stumble across a really good writer! I think you have a fantastic way with the rhythm of words in your writing. I can hear the beat in my head as I read through it. I love poetry that reads as though there should be music int he background. I love early mornings when I well rested, but that is very rare. Mostly I'm just grumpy. But who cares. This is really good. Keep writing more!
| Jeremy Kerley 10/5/05 . chapter 1
Good poem. I like the rhyming. (one of my dislikes is poetry that dosen't rhyme) But still, this is good.
| ifitaintkatie 10/4/05 . chapter 1
This is a great poem, how did it do in the contest? The only thing that I would suggest it to change the line with breeze in it. 'a faint, cooling breeze of the early spring breeze' is kind of repetitive and awkward. Anyways, I have to say that I really liked this poem! :)