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| Translucent Darkness 2006-07-24 ch 1, | Nice poem. I liked how you kept it slightly vague and used symbolism; it would have had a different effect if you hadn't. |
| Novocaine Addiction 2005-10-06 ch 1, | Simple, yet powerful. Good work. -Standing ovation (in return) |