Hi, i read this and I think it is a very deep and emotional piece

I liked it alot, keep on writing!

While I'm on the note of "liking" things or not, I just thought I'd notice that you seem to have stumbled onto an essay written by someone who I don't necessarily like a user by the name of MrFlames.

I don't know how you feel about his immature mockery, but I thought if you had a minute you may want to read a piece I'm writing called "The Greatest Review Ever"

just thought I'd make mention

either way, I enjoyed the poem:)

the one, the only,AVDA

This is a good piece, and even if I didn't know the history behind it I would have a fair idea just from these few lines.

Spawny

Cool!

I really like this poem. Short lines, but effective and convey emotion. I like the effect of the tears crystallizing into snow! But you could consider ice as well, since it's frozen and hard.

Your poem's nice, end of story. (:

Wow, love the brusque tone of this poem.

"Yet, you continueto be strandedon the sister islesof “What if” and “If only”."

I love your metaphor of sister isles. You write wonderfully well - somehow you manage to capture so much in just a few words.:)

nice. really, quite nice.

* noelle