Ah! Cute! I loved it, contnue writting!

:smiles: It's so sweet; makes me wish that was me in the poem

EB

oist, matulog ka na!kidding asyd. this one's actually cool kc one would be confused kung you're in your dreams or simply imagining stuff. it makes the reader empathize with what you're feeling without essentially having to relate with the actual experience you've had. gets? bsta, ako gets k xa. and all i can say is that it's cool. although too mushy for me, with which symbolizes too much clinging. and i'm not very fond of clingy stuff. however, if that's how the way you feel, then go for it. that's all girl, keep it up! (

wow... just wonderful

:) this piece really makes me feel... fills me with a sense of warmth, and at the same time, a sense of angst and longing.. being in the same situation.. i feel your words completely.. keep up the good work.