I love this! Nyte is so funny. The Aunt Annie bit was great-- you do have to wonder about people who actually send in letters and don't mind having their problems splashed across the papers...

His, I dunno, blase attitude about everything and the way he just seems to accept everything is great. Does he really kill people? Hm...

This is such a great beginning! I'm so hooked. I love how you set up their past, and tell us all of this but make it seem really natural.

And Blue seems very cool-- obsessed with her appearance, and a little too proud, a little competitive, but willing to do anything to get her job done. Why does the smell of food make her sick, I wonder?

I love the re-write. Love it! Though it looks DOA...

Hey! Long time, not talk! I was just looking around FP when I noticed that you wre re-writing LTC. Nyte really is a sadistic little monster isn't he? Still, if he's as funny as he was in the last three stories he'll stay one of my favorites. Because the bad good guys are so much fun. ^^

Hi there! It's me again! Thanks very much for your email reply and review. And yeah, I guess Kinyte is pretty much of a badass to start with, huh? Like the scene where he terrorised everyone in the dining room. Wondering about his hatred for his father... what's the source exactly and is his mother that murderous as he said? Well, I guess maybe things gonna get clearer in the future, but ah well...

Wow. This is really good. Really. I love Nyte's character, and the conflict with his father- his father seems kind of like one of those workaholics that doesn't normally even tell people they have kids or they're married until the person asks, and then they have to think about it for a few seconds. You have woven together a complex and intriguing world- keep up the good work.

Nice! The prince sounds like a very annoying person to live with... though fun to read about, of course.

I guess that a little more descriptions about surroundings would be nice, but I wouldn't say terribly needed. I imagined things fine. Update!

I don't usually read fantasy, but this is pretty good! Kept me interested enough to move on to the second chapter, to review, even when it's 1:30 in the morning and I have to get up early...

good job!

awesome. great sense of humore. although nyte seems a little too much of a jerk for me to really sympathize with, he is quite funny. the only complaint is you might want to describe the palace a little more. hm...yes, thats all for now. good job and cant wait to see your next update.

awesome beginning. i havent read the original before, but i look forward to reading the second version. second versions are almost always better than the original. good sense of humor, though i didnt really get too good of a sense of the city. i guess that would be my only complaint, and rest assured its a minor one.

I really like this. It's beautifully written. I hope you keep writing this story.

Ja ne,Plyo

Although I have read the original version of this, this chapter went down quite interesting. Of course, it has been awhile since I have read the original. It is funny how much more fleshed out a good rewrite of a story that you love can improve.

I so miss this story. I was sorry you ended it.

Blue comes off as even more of a pain, and I like your description of the city at the beginning of this chapter. One thing I would suggest to you, and I don't remember if you ever did this, but you need a prologue to explain this world. It is kind of a throw off about the vampire bit. Our society has something set idea of vampires, and you do have a unique variety in this story.

I like this story too. Please say there's more!! Write more! lol! ^_^ Keep writing

Ooh, so spooky!