um...-steps away- of course you're not...-steps farther away- lol. jk. that's cool, though. putting a dream into a haiku. i've never tried that. i usually just write about...nature. lol. just like haiku is 'supposed' to be about. maybe i should try writing about something besides nature...now you've inspired me! thanks! lol. keep writing ~Wintertigress

how... unique. not about nature, not about life, not about anything typical. i LOVED it.

o, that's really cool. I really like it. ^-^

oh.that is amazing for a first haiku,quite chilling to be honest-i adored it,it knocked me sideways! wow.

hehe, i'm so used to reading haikus about nature and stuff, but this is good. ^-^ keep on writing haikus, and you'll really enjoy it!

I believe you. Of course you're not a murderer.

Okay, I'm kidding around.

Whee, I like it. Very much. Good job. Haha, I always thought that... Haiku's were usually about... Nature. Oh well.

Dude, that is so kool

Cool haiku! I've got to say, I've never read a haiku on that subject matter. It sounds more like a dream than a nightmare... hey, I've got weird dreams too!! Unique, it was good.