ROLF! What the fuck?! lol!

Very good! Write more please =D

Nice story. No mermaids? That sounds really interesting and I would have liked to see how that works in later chapters.

Ahahah. Poor boy. ]: This story interested me. teehee. Update please! :3

I loke it update soon.

Hmm
Wonder what'll happen...
I hope you put up the next chapter soon :)

i loved it please write more!

hee hee
really kewl idea
please continue writing.

UPDATE!

Why haven't you updated. your story is really good so far. please update some more.

You must! I repeat must! update! I've been waiting! Sorry didn't review earlier, been busy. UPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATE!

Dear god, how frustrating would that be? XD

You haven't mixed up your "its and it's" once. *squints at you* Good. Keep it up. *twitches and mutters about its and it's*

I love your characterisation. Veanu is so cute. XD I can't wait until the other merman arrives. (Will it have dreadlocks?!)

Anyway, gotta go, update any one of your stories and I'll leap to read it. Sorry again for attacking you on your other one.

Hey cool story I can just imagine how wonderful the merman on merman action will be. Veanu is so lively its very endearing.

wow, so far so great. Continue, pleaseness.

well this sounds interesting,haha