Hmm, I like it. You should have way more reviews than this. However, considering the fact that this is simply a shadow of ffnet, I'm not surprised by the lack thereof. Nevertheless, I shall be a good reviewer. I really think this is dark, angsty, cold, beautiful, warm, all at the same time. Excellent job capturing the essence of emotion.

This poem is bold and full of life. I love the way it just explodes in my mind. The end is perfect and the entire thing was really rather clever.

Very nice! I love the Shakespearian tones and wording. Very VERY good poem! It has a really interesting flow and story line, I really really like the way you wrote this! And thank you for the review! Always appreciated!~lilyoftheflames

I love this poem. It is totally different from all these other poems I read...and I've seen some weird stuff. Anyways, I love the line, "Bringing it back to your lips, lighting it again, as though the last time was not enough."

That was great for some reason it caught me. Keep up the great work!

Fascinating; you take on a very powerful, and almost pervocative tone of voice in this. I enjoyed it, keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.